Pasta/Cloud AT

I write this critique for the second (partly THIRD)time because I lost the first one so sorry for all the typos, try to write fast aha! and again, don't take the visison origitnality and that so seriously, because it isn't helpful when it comes to my critique xD Hope you find it helpful!!

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<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="564" title="Bullet; Black"/> Since last time I can see improvement in the legs and shading!! The knees and elbows are at the equal height, which absolutely is something you must keep up <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/> I also like the way you drew the start of the tail, while the end is a bit strange : P It's still not a big issue, aha.

About Anatomy
<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="564" title="Bullet; Black"/> My favorite joint is the joint at the left front leg. It's well drawn! The only annoying thing about it is the paws. Since the leg is lifted up, the paw should look more loose/released. You can try drawing the toes with less height to give that effect c: I'll also write more about this in my paw tutorial that is coming!^^

Head
<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="564" title="Bullet; Black"/> When it comes to the head, the muzzle is too long, while the forehead is too short compared to each others. The forehead's height is good, though!

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="564" title="Bullet; Black"/> The eyes are placed at a great height, but it's shaped a wee bit strange. I like your style of eyes still :3 In a while you could try giving the eyes more expression, perhaps?

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="564" title="Bullet; Black"/> I like the shape of the jaw. Just remember the fur that's «sticking» out from the head not should be connected with the jaw. The jaw should have it's own fur «sticking out» (I'm not sure how to explain this: but it has something to do with that the jaw is connected to the rest of the skull, but not a part of it itself.) I hope you do understand what I mean with it ;; I still do like the shape of the jaw, good job!

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="564" title="Bullet; Black"/> When it comes to the nose it surely depends on your style, but I would suggest drawing the nose more sharp than circulary :3

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="564" title="Bullet; Black"/> This is a skull you can study if you'd like to go to the next level! : ) First it may be hard understanding the proportions, especially since parts of the skull is covered with muscles. But try while looking at real wolves or dogs with fur at the same time you study the skull, and you'll get it.

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Another tip: Sometimes it's hard looking at how the head of wolves is shaped because of all the fur, so it would be a good idea looking at dogs that don't have to much fur to understand the proportions better.

More anatomy thingys

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="564" title="Bullet; Black"/> I love the neck you drew; it's mostly perfect, the only thing I would suggest about it, would be having more fur at the beginning of the neck (where the neck begins from the head).

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="564" title="Bullet; Black"/> The back is another good thing here! The end of the back is perfect, while the start is too straight; but only a tiny bit! The back legs are muuuuuuuuuuch better than last time! Everything (the feet) under the heel is too long though, and looks nearly broken. The lines you drew the mark the feets are a bit too much (it's really hard to describe what I mean! I wish I could draw you this to show what I meant omg>~<) But you should be proud this is an amazingle much improved leg.

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="564" title="Bullet; Black"/> My favorite back leg is the left one. I like it because you managed to mark that the wolf have a butt + a leg xD

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="564" title="Bullet; Black"/> So the last thing I will write about, still about the legs: They should be placed more forward. If you study the skeleton of a wolf or canine, you'll see where to hip bones are. If the hip bones are placed correctly, it will be lots easier to place the legs out of it.

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< I hope you find this helpful!! Please continue making art, you've improved a lot, I must say! And still, I did not mean to be harsh or anything with you if it seems so, I only would love to help you. We both can learn from it<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/> if you have questions or didn't understand something, please just ask because Madi won't bite you even though she has sharp teeth xD so yeah! Can't wait to see more of your drawings! c: